mar 5
Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing? After revising my paragraph, I'd add more explanation to my ideas and make my sentences clearer. I also fixed some grammar and tried to make my evidence connect better to my claim. I improved my paragraph by adding more explanation and fixing grammar. Revising helps me see what I need to change and make my writing stronger.